English Translation of Positive Dance Time

Tommy Teasdale

 December 16th 2017
  Tried To Translate


In a nutshell, Kinoshita is destined to become a Vocaloid legend someday. I wonder what makes him so talented but damn his songs are great. So when I learned he published a new song I jumped on the occasion.

It has been quite some time since the last time but I think the wait was worthwhile.

I published a video of my translation on Youtube and Nicovideo!

When I first heard the song, I was absolutely entranced by it. Without even thinking I went on Twitter and asked for permissions in public… that was probably not a good idea but I really wanted to secure a chance to be the first to do it.

The song is about Una Otomachi and Rin Kagamine putting up a dance night for everyone who's depressed then inviting them to join in. It is a cute and straightforward song. The rhythm was enticing and the mix of English and Japanese well done.

A song like that sure makes for an interesting challenge. The main lines in Japanese were often cut by some sentences in English and the song had a lot of shorter line than what I was used to.

Yet I had some difficulties with the terms 夢色. I translated it as “colourful lights” because I thought of the stars seem to dance as they shine.

My original plan for this project was actually to make a hybrid English/French translation where the parts in English in the original version were translated into French. However, the results were not good once I started to edit the video. The video was confusing with the French and English text on the screen at the same time. So I decided to change it to a pure English translation.

This experience of editing a video was very interesting. So I might ask for permission for more videos in the future so look forward to it.

Link to the Youtube version : https://youtu.be/lizXG4cwU5w

Link to the Nicovideo version : http://www.nicovideo.jp/watch/sm32422638

ポジティブ☆ダンスタイム (2017)

キノシタ - kinoshita

nicovideo: http://nico.ms/sm32087162

Youtube: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FT91CrPPAqc

Here we Go! 1 2 3 4 Those who are sad too Are you ready? Are you ready to start? (Yes!) Skip & Clap, then One Two Three GO! Positive☆Dance☆Time Under the colorful lights dancing at night Shall we dance? Let’s dance so hard you’ll laugh about yesterday My dear angry Moon, would you like to dance with us Shall we dance? Dancing is so much fun 1 2 3 Following the tempo 1 2 3 Casting a magic spell The world began to shine brighter All because of your moves Wake up! wake up! Please, hurry, do not be late for our enchanting Dance Time Jumping! jumping! Put away any shame and fly! high! fly! high! high! high! high! high| (Hahahahahaa! What? Hyaaa!) Dancing☆Dancing☆Time Dancing☆Dancing☆Time 1 2 3 4 Positive☆Dance☆Time Even nasty things Let’s Dance! Let’s Dance! Let’s Dance! If I could dance together with you Dancing☆Dancing☆Time Dancing☆Dancing☆Time Even if the beat is clumsy They will surely shine Let’s be ambitious! Under the deep blue sky 5 6 7 8 You who cannot stand still Are you ready? Are you ready to go? Skip & Clap then One Two Three GO! Positive☆Dance☆Time Under the cloudy sky dancing at night Shall we dance? To the point of laughing about it tomorrow My dear gloomy star, would you like to join us? Shall we dance? We will brighten you up 1 2 3 Following the tempo 1 2 3 Casting a magic spell The world began to shine brighter All because of your moves Wake up! wake up! Do not stop please It’s our amazing Dance Time Jumping! Jumping! Lose yourself at it then Fly! high! fly! high! Yaaay! Dancing☆Dancing☆Time Dancing☆Dancing☆Time 1 2 3 4 Positive☆Dance☆Time Face forward then Let’s Dance! Let’s Dance! Let’s Dance! I wanna dance together with you Dancing☆Dancing☆Time Dancing☆Dancing☆Time Even if you are not familiar with the beat It will surely reach you Let’s be ambitious! Under the colorful lights Are you ready? Wake up! wake up! Please do not be late for the greatest Dance Time Jumping! jumping! Let yourself go to the beat and Fly! high! fly! high! High! high! high! high! 'cause this is so wonderful Dancing☆Dancing☆Time Dancing☆Dancing☆Time 1 2 3 4 Positive☆Dancing☆Time Wipe your tears then Let’s Dance! Let’s Dance! Let’s Dance! If I could dance together with you Dancing☆Dancing☆Time Dancing☆Dancing☆Time Now you can paint with your personallity And express yourself Let’s be ambitious! On this blank canvas One more time!? Positive☆Dance☆Time Dancing☆Dancing☆Time Dancing☆Dancing☆Time 1 2 3 4 Positive☆Dance☆Time Everyone together Let’s Dance! Let’s Dance! Let’s Dance! It’s so fun! It’s so fun! We are the best! Forever and everyday I want to dance with you and have fun to exhaustion Let’s be ambitious! But this is over for today 1 2 3 4 Those who are sad too Are you ready? Are you ready to start? Skip & Clap then One Two Three GO! Positive☆Dance☆Time



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